Scott's Comments

Nice banner and welcome video on home page!

There is a lot of text on the home page. I recommend giving more general information, and add more links to let people discover those pages for themselves.

Link to Jesus Film is not on the Engwo page – you can either remove the reference to it, or add the link to the English page.

On the Photos page,

• For the photo gallery, please put some explanation above: something like “These are photos of different Ngwo language development workshops” or something

•  for the slideshow, please give some explanation of what the photos are about. Either put the explanation above the whole slideshow, or put some titles on the photos themselves. I recommend you remove the “Welcome” banner on this page – it looks like filler, just taking up space. It’s the first thing people see on the home page, so it doesn’t add anything to put it also on another page.

Videos page: “LUCYBRAND” should be “Lucy Brand”. But is this video really representing your website well? If it is just “filling space” until you get some content from home, please just unpublish it until you get your own videos to upload.

“CULTURE” page is not available in Engwo – please publish it. I assume you are going to add videos to this page? At the moment, it looks unbalanced, with a video on one side, and a big blank space on the other. Maybe make this section 1 column for now, until you have more videos to add. OR, you could add some text next to the video to explain the video, along with a small picture of a Ngwo dinner (just to balance the page).